Freddy Ellsworth drove his red convertible up the narrow
country road and pulled into a stony driveway. He had
turned forty-seven yesterday and smiled, envisioning
warmer climates in the not-too-distant future as balmy late-
April breezes washed over him. Through the windshield he
could see Jack lugging the last piece of summer furniture
up the front steps and arranging it on the porch. Freddy
parked the car and stepped out, giving Jack a quick salute.

“Thanks for hauling that stuff out of the garage, Jack.
Want things to look their best,” he said. “The shrubs you
trimmed look great too.”
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“No problem, Freddy,” he said, wiping a forearm across his
brow as he bounded down the stairs. He wore blue jeans,
sneakers and a red tee shirt. At twenty-three, Jack Mason
was enjoying his current lot in life. He had finished college
last year and now worked fulltime with Freddy Ellsworth at
his real estate agency. Whether maintaining the
unoccupied properties for sale, taking courses toward his
license or accompanying Freddy on a showing, Jack
enjoyed the variety and freedom this job provided. He
pictured himself here for two or three more years, earning
a bit of money and gaining experience before moving on to
bigger things. There were bridges and high rises yet to be
built.

“Vic Anderson is going to snap this one up,” Freddy said.
“Hard to put one over on a car salesman, but this house
sells itself.”

“It’s a beauty,” Jack agreed, admiring the light green Dutch
Colonial Revival with a long lazy porch. An expansive lawn,
surrounding trees and stunning view of the river valley
made him realize that Freddy was right. The house
would
sell itself.

“Stick around and pick up some pointers,” Freddy said,
adjusting the knot in his tie.

“Okay. Hey, nice one by the way,” Jack said, pointing at
the bold printing on the tie. “
Pineapples? Don’t recall
seeing that one before.”

“Birthday present from my wife Anna Beth,” he said,
proudly fingering the tie as he showed it off. “Pretty neat,
huh? I love it.”

“As long as
somebody does,” Jack teased as he walked by,
gently punching Freddy in the arm. “Let me close the
garage door. I hear a car heading up the road.”
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A few moments later, Vic Anderson sped up the driveway
in a new 1981 white Cadillac Fleetwood, most of his family
in tow. He sounded the horn as he waved to Freddy,
parking beside him. The car doors swiftly opened and the
Anderson family stepped out.

“Good to see you again, Fred,” Vic said, exuding unending
charm and enthusiasm while firmly shaking the real estate
agent’s hand. “Great tie!” His thick silvery head of hair was
tousled by the wind. “Of course you remember my lovely
wife Suzy, and I brought some of the family this time to
give the place the once-over before we seal the deal.” Vic
introduced his children as they walked up the driveway to
the house. “This is George, the younger of my two sons.
He starts high school next year. Patrick’s at baseball
practice now, and he’s pretty good too, right, Suzy?”

“He is indeed, sweetheart.”

“Nice to meet you, George,” Freddy said with a nod.

“And this lovely lady is my oldest,” Vic said proudly,
indicating his daughter. “Charlene helps me run the office
at my dealership. Great with numbers. Keeps all that
paperwork tamed and organized.”

“Pleased to meet you also,” Freddy said, smiling at the
blonde twenty-two year old in a pastel pink flowered
blouse and white slacks.

“You too, Mr. Ellsworth,” she replied as they ambled past
the garage on the way to the house. Charlene glanced to
her right and noticed Jack heading in their direction. He
looked up at the same moment, their eyes meeting. A
warm breeze brushed across the property and through the
adjacent field.
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“Oh, this is Jack Mason,” Freddy added, making a quick
round of introductions as Jack approached. “He works for
me. Hopes to be selling houses on his own someday.”

“As long as you don’t make me wear those
ties,” Jack said,
pleased that Charlene joined in on the resulting laughter.
He and Charlene exchanged a silent smile as they climbed
the front porch steps.

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“And the view south out of any window in this house is
spectacular,” Freddy said as he, Vic and Suzy gazed
outdoors through a picture window in the upstairs hallway.
Splashes of warm April sunshine flooded the plush
carpeting.

“I adore this house,” Suzy said, opening a small window
and inhaling the sweet air.

“I hereby claim this room!” George called out from a side
hallway. “Finders keepers!”

Charlene inched up and peeked through the window,
pointing out a few white flowering trees off to the left side
of the property. Jack stood at attention near the top of the
staircase, his hands clasped behind his back, noting her
subtle reflection in the window pane. “What are those
pretty trees in the tall grass, Mr. Ellsworth?”
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“Those are–”

“–apple trees!” Jack eagerly chimed in, as if unaware of
anyone else in the hallway except for Charlene. “They
produce good fruit, too.”

“They look so lovely in bloom. And I see a small stream
nearby. I just
have to check it out!” Charlene gushed as
she spun around. “Jack, could you show me the way?”

Jack raised his eyebrows. “Um, sure… I mean, if that’s
okay,” he tried to casually remark while glancing at
Charlene’s father.

Vic nodded. “You go ahead, son,” he pleasantly said as he
guided his wife into the next room. “And if Freddy needs
you, well, we can spot you out
any of these windows!”

“Yes, sir,” Jack said as Charlene brushed past, indicating
with a grin for him to follow her down the stairs.

                             
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“So you run your father’s dealership?” Jack asked as they
walked across the spongy grass through an intoxicatingly
sweet breeze.

“Well, just the office,” Charlene said. “I don’t actually sell
any cars.”

“Bet you could do that too,” Jack said.
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“I’m training someone to work in his new place that opens
next month. It’s fifteen miles east of here. That’s why Dad
and Mom want to buy a new house. Something midway
between,” Charlene explained. “Besides, they’ve always
wanted a bigger home, and since business is picking up…”

“You couldn’t have chosen a better one. Just look at that
view,” Jack said, stopping to gaze across the valley. “My,
but whoever maintained this property did a fantastic job!”

Charlene laughed. “Jack, are you bragging?”

“Maybe just a
little bit.” He shrugged, looking into her eyes
for a moment, enchanted by her soft features, but hoping
she didn’t think he was staring.

“Well, a man should take pride in his accomplishments,”
she replied, turning and walking to the edge of the taller
grass and gazing at the apple trees a short distance away.

Jack followed her like a puppy. “I hope to accomplish even
bigger things. One day I’d like to design and build–
buildings.”

“Oh?”

“But only after I reconstruct that last sentence.”

Charlene smiled, inhaling the scent of apple blossoms
wafting through the air as the sound of a nearby stream
gurgled beyond the trees. “The apple blooms smell
wonderful, but I don’t dare walk any closer through the tall
grass in these shoes.”
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“I don’t suggest it.”

“And your sentence was quite fine, Jack. So you’ve
decided to go on for more schooling?”

Jack gave Charlene a quick rundown of his architectural
ambitions. “But you never know in the end. Selling real
estate could grow on me.
Today’s a pretty good day after
all,” he said with a grin dripping with infatuation as the
brilliant sunshine filtered through a trio of towering pines.
“Though I’ll miss maintaining this property if your father
buys it.”

“Oh, he
will,” Charlene assured him. “He and Mom both
love it. And now that I see the house, I do too.”

Jack sighed. “Well, that settles it. I guess I’ll have no
reason to stop by anymore.”
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“That’d be a shame,” Charlene said with an exaggerated
sigh. “Then again, I suppose I
could invite you up for
dinner occasionally just for old time’s sake.”

“Now
there’s an idea,” Jack said as a chorus of crickets
sang in the field. “I can give you my phone number. I have
an apartment in town.”

“Great. And then maybe sometime…”

“Yeah, maybe…” Jack studied her soft smile as he rocked
back and forth on his feet. “Say, do you like going to the
movies?”

                            
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Grape-size raindrops pelted the skylights above a crowded
shopping mall food court. Tangles of black, gray and white
August clouds drifted chaotically overhead. Inside, a gentle
strum of guitar strings filled the wide corridor as
Christopher Cross’s
Sailing issued from a wall speaker
nearby. Jack gazed at the pounding rain then glanced at
Charlene sitting across the table enjoying a salad and
ginger ale.
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“Some walk, huh?” he said with a roll of his eyes before
dipping one of his fries into a pool of ketchup.

“It might clear up, Jack. Besides, sitting here and talking
with you is fun, too,” Charlene said, playfully tapping Jack’
s foot.

“What shall we talk about?”

Charlene smirked affectionately. “Well, how about the way
you drown your French fries with ketchup before eating
them?” she teased. “Though it is endearing.”

Jack laughed as he tossed a fry into her salad. “That’s how
I’ve eaten them since I was a little kid. You’ll have to get
used to that delightful quirk of mine.” Jack stared at
Charlene, raising an eyebrow. “Shall I tell you about one of
your quirks?”

Charlene leaned back. “I’m not sure. Dare I ask?”

“Go ahead.”

Charlene blushed, taking a sip of her soda. “Okay, Jack.
Zing me. I can take it.”
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“All right, except that–I can’t.” Jack picked up another
French fry, dipping it in ketchup. “You see, Charlene, up to
now, you been, well–
perfect.” He ate the fry, chewing it
with a serious expression before bursting uncontrollably
into a grin.

“Good answer,” Charlene replied, stealing one of his fries.
“Charming
and calculating at the same time. But I’m not
entirely perfect, you know. I once dropped my brother’s
baseball in a bucket of green paint.”

“Nasty.”

I was thirteen and he was annoying.”

“I hid one of my sister’s favorite shoes in the sandbox for a
week,” Jack one-upped her. “Loretta nearly killed me.”

“That’s not a quirk. That was just mean.”

“So was the green baseball.”

“True.” Charlene thought for a moment. “I’ve finished at
least two dozen paint-by-number sets.
All of them kittens
and puppies.”

“Hmmm, you’ve got a thing for paint?”

“Maybe.”

“A half jar of spaghetti sauce has been sitting in my
refrigerator for about five weeks? Still good?”

Charlene made a disgusted face. “Toss it.”
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“Chicken.”

“I
love chicken–barbecued. And a fine glass of red wine,
riding horses and counting stars in an autumn sky.”

Jack leaned forward and spoke softly, feigning grave
seriousness. “I once saw a star that landed in a
snow bank
when I was eight years old.”

“Impossible,” Charlene said, eating her salad. “The snow
would’ve melted.”

“But it didn’t. Then after I ran away from the star I heard…”

Charlene looked up, noting the unreadable expression
pasted upon Jack’s face. “Heard
what? What happened?”

Jack tilted his head as he leaned back in his chair, smiling
slyly. “I think I’d rather not say just yet. Maybe
someday I’ll
tell you.”

“Big secret?” Jack winked playfully. “Okay, be that way. I’ll
get the truth out of you one way or another.”

“There’s no big secret,” Jack assured her. He then again
peered up at the sodden skies above Sage Harbor and
grimaced. “And that’s no sun shower. Not exactly the day I
had planned for us.”

“We could go see another movie,” Charlene suggested as
handfuls of shoppers and diners, many clutching plastic
bags and foam coffee cups, drifted in either direction past
the food court. The mall corridors were bulging to near
capacity with the onset of inclement weather.
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Jack shrugged. “I had my heart set on walking with you
today.”

“Some plans are meant to be changed, Mr. Mason. You’ll
just have to be content spending your afternoon here with
me,” she replied with a smile before spearing a tomato
wedge with her fork and popping it into her mouth.

“I can do that, Miss Anderson.” Jack returned the smile.
“And as for some of my
other plans…”

“Oh? What about them?” Charlene curiously inquired,
pleasantly intrigued by the pretended mysteriousness in
Jack’s tone of voice.

“About me going on for more schooling someday? Well, I
think I’m kind of happy right now in real estate. I enjoy it–
selling instead of building.” Jack contentedly leaned back
in his chair. “And I’m happy being with you, too. You don’t
seem to mind me hanging around after all.”

Well…” Charlene crinkled her nose before bursting into a
grin. “Not in the least, Jack. I was
hoping to squeeze in
more movies and dinners and walks with you. It’s a habit I
don’t want to break any time soon.”

“Wouldn’t think of it,” Jack said, his words tinged with the
warmth of a summer’s day now hidden behind the low-
lying clouds stretched across town. “I can see us walking
here and there, hand in hand, for quite some time.”
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“Me too,” Charlene softly replied.

And so they did, even as the lush greens of summer
gradually dissolved into the frosted golds, reds and
yellows of a crisp and thriving autumn. They walked
through leaves and snow and the biting chill of January,
and dined on steaks and red wine in February candlelight,
and later on Chinese takeout while sitting on the front
porch steps as drooping bunches of purple and white lilacs
lightly perfumed the air. But spring swiftly retreated with
the lighting of the first barbecues, and summer progressed
at its usual meteoric pace. Miles of lazy driving
commenced along steamy asphalt roads, under canopies
of stars and past lakeshores and quaint cafés and
windblown willows. Ears of corn were picked, lemonade
was poured over clear, cracking ice, and hours of
conversation filled up the wide stretchable spaces of
summertime. But all too soon the sunlight waned as once
more storm windows replaced screens and clouds grew
leaden. Trees again burst into vibrant colors and leaves
quickly piled high upon the sidewalks.

Another of many long strolls commenced as Jack and
Charlene swished through the unraked walks in cool late-
September twilight. Hand in hand they wandered, under
the glow of starlight and beneath the subtle shade of bony
trees until they stopped under the pale light and gentle
hum of a streetlamp. Jack tenderly held her shaking hand
as a shooting star from long ago sailed across the edges of
his memory. Nervous words were spoken as he lovingly
placed a ring upon her finger.

And the walk continued the following June down the aisle
of St. Dominic’s Church when roses bloomed in bunches
and the sun was pasted upon a sapphire-blue sky. Under
a shower of confetti and smiles, Jack and Charlene exited
the church to the pipe organ notes of Mendelssohn’s
Wedding March.
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And five years later they stood outside the front window of
Jack’s new office on a sunny May morning in East Oaks.
Friends, relatives and city officials gathered, snapshots
were taken and a stretch of gold ribbon was cut with a
large pair of ceremonial scissors. Everyone applauded as
Mason Real Estate was officially opened for business. Will
Mason, now three, grabbed onto his father’s leg and
wondered when he could have one of the helium balloons
to play with. Charlene stood next to her husband and son,
holding a bouncy Elaine, who wasn’t quite yet one. Only
Freddy Ellsworth and his pineapple tie were missing, now
lounging underneath a table umbrella somewhere along
the Florida coast with his wife Anna Beth, a lit Cuban cigar
and a cold pitcher of Piña Coladas.

And then Jack sat with his wife and two children that
following Christmas Eve in an oak pew in St. Dominic’s
church, Will and Elaine both squirming between them
before the start of the Mass. Lit candles and fresh pine
wreaths decorated the walls and pillars as
O Holy Night
sounded from the choir loft. The outdoor air lay frosty and
still on that cloudless night. As Jack lifted Will and placed
him on one end of the pew, Charlene bundled up Elaine in
her arms to keep her away from her brother now banished
to the opposite end. The two parents glanced at one
another and smiled, silently acknowledging the endless
labor and creativity that went into rearing their family each
and every day.
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Then Charlene took her husband’s hand and looked up at
him. “What are we going to do this time next year, honey?”

“Hmmm?” Jack said, tousling his son’s hair.

“Well, we’ll have one child on either side of us,” she said,
gazing at Jack with a playful sparkle in her eye, “and a
third one in between.”

What do you–” Then with thunderbolt clarity, Jack
understood, his thoughts frozen for an instant before
breaking out into a Christmas-morning grin. He was still
building things after all.

              
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