Jack held out a hand, his fingers glowing against the
luminous backdrop, his face basking in the lustrous light.
Only a few more steps and the star would be within reach.
Only a few more steps… Jack lifted his boot just as he
heard the voices.

A side door to the nearby house had suddenly opened.
Several people spoke at once, apparently preparing to step
outdoors. Somebody laughed. Another voice responded.
Hurry and put your coat on! Jack craned his neck, scanning
the terrain in every direction. He had to get out of here.
Got
that camera?
Jack glanced over his shoulder, observing
the trail of footprints leading back up the slope into the
birch and sugar maples. He would never make it that way
without being spotted.
It’s quite a sight! Jack’s heart
pounded. He’d have to circle around the block and up the
hill to get back home.
Wait’ll you see this! It should only
take five minutes. But there was no more time to think. He
had to run. Now!
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Jack spun to his left, crunching through the few remaining
yards of snow until his feet hit the narrow stony road in
front of the house. He dashed down the street, his eye
catching a blur of Christmas tree lights shining through the
front picture window. There were the voices again, and
more laughter. Jack’s lungs burned with the cold. He felt
as if he were in trouble. He couldn’t let them see him.

Then a door slammed. They were outside. Voices and
footfalls through the snow grew louder in the chilled night
air. Jack didn’t bother to look over his shoulder as he ran,
fearing he’d be spotted in the next instant. Ahead of him
was a refuge of pine shrubs draped with Christmas lights
in front of the only other residence on the street–a beige
aluminum sided house with olive-green shutters. Jack
veered to his right and leaped into the shrubs, wrapping
himself into a ball as he leaned against the frozen wood
latticework beneath the front porch.

Jack breathed heavily, his heart pounding. The sweet
scent of pine invaded his nostrils and helped to calm him
down. He gazed through the snow-dusted branches
ablaze with colorful lights, the soft pine needles brushing
against his cheeks. The voices and laughter in the distance
echoed under the evening moonlight but grew no closer.
No one had spotted him. Jack smiled, proud that he had
eluded the strangers. Now it was merely a waiting game.
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And then ten minutes later, they were gone. The laughter
drifted off and a door slammed shut. Once again Jack’s
world was filled with the silence of the night, brutishly cold
and splashed with lunar light. He waited another minute
before moving to make sure he was alone. Then slowly,
Jack turned and peeked through the frozen branches at
the other house. He could see his star in the distance, still
glowing in the snow bank, alone in the night. All clear.

Jack stood up, the stiffness quickly draining from his
aching knees. Then another door suddenly opened. Jack
dropped to the ground again, realizing that the noise was
directly above him on the front porch. Somebody had
opened the inside door to the house. A moment later, a
wooden storm door swung outward and two people
stepped onto the porch. Bits of laughter and conversation
drifted outdoors as the lilting notes of Leroy Anderson’s
Sleigh Ride played in the background. Both doors quickly
closed and a momentary silence followed.

Jack craned his head back and looked up through the pine
shrubs, unable to see anyone near the porch railing. He
wondered if someone had spotted him through a window
and wished he were invisible. But when no one peered
over the railing or called out to him, Jack felt a little better.
He hoped whoever was on the porch would hurry back
inside so that he could escape. Then he heard two voices.

“It’s cold out here, Charlie. Why can’t you tell me inside?”

“Because I don’t want anyone else to hear us. Here, button
your coat.”

“All right.”
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Jack heard playful laughter and a dull stomping of shoes
on the floorboards as if someone were trying to keep warm.

“Well, Charlie, what did you want to say? Or are you just
trying to sneak another Christmas kiss?”

“I have a present for you, Alice.”

“You already gave me gifts, Charlie–the Beach Boys album
and the hairbrush set. And that was very sweet.”

Jack could hear Alice give Charlie a brief kiss and rolled
his eyes.

“But I have one more present I don’t want anyone else to
see. It has to be secret.”

“Now I’m intrigued. What is it, Charlie?”

“First you have to close your eyes and hold out your hand.”

“Oooh, you’re teasing! But all right.”

Jack strained his ears to hear every detail, trying to
imagine what gift Charlie had bought. A snow brick maker?
What could be better than that?

“Okay. You can open now.”

“Oh my gosh, Charlie, it’s
beautiful! Is this…?” Alice nearly
sobbed. “Is this really…?”
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“It is. I want you to marry me, Alice.”

“Oh, I love it. I really do!”

“I’m glad.”

“I know we had talked about it…”

Jack heard a quiver in Alice’s voice and thought he could
hear her sniffle once or twice, as if she were on the verge
of tears.

“You
are happy, right?” Charlie asked.

“Of course I am, but right now I’m just…” Alice took a deep
breath and finally laughed with giddy delight. “Thank you,
Charlie! This moment is perfect.”

“You’re welcome,
but…”

“But
what, Charlie?”

“But–do you want to
marry me?”

“Of
course I do, Charlie! I love you. So that’s a yes.”

Charlie laughed. “Just making sure. And I love you too.”

A brief silence followed. Jack imagined that Alice and
Charlie were kissing again. Jack ran a finger through the
pine needles out of boredom, wondering how long he
would be stuck here. He could almost smell the tomato
soup and saltine crackers waiting for him at home, cooling
down with each passing moment.
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“Oh, Charlie, but how could you afford this?”

“Well, I…”

“Did you spend your savings?”

“It’s not what you think, Alice, but I suppose I should tell
you the truth.”

“What do you mean?”

“Well, that isn’t–a diamond. But it is a real gemstone.
White topaz.”

“Looks just like a diamond to me, Charlie. And I do adore
it.”

“Maybe when I make some money in a few years, I can buy
you the real thing.”
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“No, Charlie. Never. I love this ring just the way it is. I don’t
ever want to part with it.”

“Thanks for saying that, Alice. I’m glad you like it.”

“You gave it to me with your heart. It’s more than I ever
hoped for.”

Then there was another silent pause, testing Jack’s
patience. He bent his head, gazing listlessly at his boots.
His toes were growing as numb as his mind by the second.
And it wasn’t even a
real diamond, Jack irritably mused,
wondering how long that girl could stand in the freezing
cold and just stare at it. This was pure, unadulterated
tedium that he had to endure–even worse than being
dragged along clothes shopping with his sisters. Why was
it happening to him? And when would it ever end?
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“But, Charlie, my parents will never let–”

“I know, Alice. That’s why I don’t want anyone else to hear
about this yet, at least for a couple years. When we’re
almost done with college we can tell people.”

“Yes, we can do that. We’ll be older and they won’t be able
to object too much.”

“So in the meantime, Alice…”

“…this will be our
secret engagement!”

“That’s just what I was thinking–a
secret. A gargantuan
secret.”

Alice giggled. “It
is rather romantic, Charlie. In this whole
wide world, only the two of us will know. What a great
secret to share as a couple.”

Jack tightened his arms around his coat, shifting his eyes
suspiciously, imagining that someone was watching him as
he reluctantly played the role of an inadvertent spy. He felt
guilty for having overheard Charlie and Alice’s
conversation, wondering if he should block his ears from
this moment forward. But it was too late now. Their secret
had been spilled. He felt miserably cold and just wanted to
go home.
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“But there’s one other problem.”

“What, Alice?”

“I won’t be able to
wear your beautiful ring!”

Charlie laughed. “I didn’t want you to be able
not to, so I
solved that problem too. Here.”

“A silver chain!”
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“You can slip it around your neck and hide the ring under
your sweater. No one will know.”

“Except
us! Here, let me put it on now.”

Jack yawned as another moment passed. The fragrant
pine was making him sleepy. If Charlie and Alice didn’t
hurry up, Jack pictured his frozen body being discovered
here by a gardener some time next spring. He quickly
rubbed a few snowflakes on his face to revive himself.

“There, Alice. No one will be the wiser.”

“Won’t it be wonderful to walk through the high school
corridors together, Charlie, knowing what we know?”

“Just don’t let any of your girlfriends see it.
Or your kid
sister.”

“Trust me, I won’t. I’ll only wear the ring when I’m sure it’ll
be safe. Otherwise I’ll hide it in my jewelry box. It has a
lock and key.”
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“Good idea. Hey, your cheeks are turning red. We better
go inside before everyone misses us.”

“I hope I can stop smiling, Charlie, or I might give our
secret away.”

“Oh, you better not do
that!”

Jack heard the front door reopen. The sounds of
conversation and Christmas carols again drifted outside,
then a door slammed shut and all was silent. Jack exhaled
deeply, remaining still for a few tedious seconds as he
listened for any more hint of talking, laughter or footsteps.
There was nothing but cold quiet. Jack stood up, popping
his head out of the shrubbery and surveying the
surroundings. Not a soul was in sight.
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He bounded out of the pine like a startled deer and ran to
the end of Spruce Lane, taking a sharp right onto the next
street. Jack took another right at the end of
that block and
trudged up a steep hill until he reached his own. He held
his gloved hands to his face to keep warm as white wisps
of breath escaped into the air like pallid ghosts. Jack made
one more right turn, marching eagerly toward the fourth
house down the street, its windows ablaze with light,
thinking only of hot soup. Then the front door swung open.
Jack looked up as his sister Loretta stepped outside like a
school principal.

Where have you been, Jack?” she said, folding her arms.
“I was about to go looking for you. Mom called out the door
three times.”
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“I had to–look for something.”

“Well, get inside. Aunt Marge and Uncle Dave have a
present for you.”

“Great. Probably another itchy sweater,” he muttered. Jack
glumly recalled the red checkered sweater he received
from his aunt and uncle last year, as well as the clip-on tie
and shirt set for his eighth birthday. Could a boy’s life be
any crueler? “
Merry Christmas!” he said sarcastically,
shaking his head while stepping into the warm house.

Jack quickly shed his hat and scarf, dropping them on the
floor. The voices of his parents and relatives sitting around
the kitchen table drifted into the front hallway wildly
decorated with strands of silver garland.

“You look sunburned.” Loretta smirked, noticing Jack’s
ruby cheeks. She hung up her coat on a wall peg. “Maybe
Mom won’t scold you.”

“I just want hot soup.”

Loretta nodded as she started to leave. “All right. I’ll reheat
it.”

“Thanks.” Jack sat on the floor and untied his snow boots.
“Hey, Loretta. Can I ask you something?”

His sister turned around. “Sure, Jack. What?”

“Promise not to tell anyone?” he whispered, removing one
boot.
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“I promise,” she said. “What do you want to know?”

“Do you
really promise? I don’t want to get in trouble.”

“I really promise.” Loretta sighed impatiently as Jack
removed his other boot. “What is it?”

“Just, umm…” He rubbed his nose. “I need to know what
a…” Jack’s heart pounded. He suddenly wondered if he
should tell his sister about Charlie and Alice, terrified he
might get into trouble. It was a
secret after all, a
gargantuan secret, and Jack felt guilty for even having
heard it. But keeping such information to himself was
about as easy as falling asleep on Christmas Eve night. So
Jack decided to take the risk. He signaled for Loretta to
step closer and stood on his tiptoes, whispering into her
ear.

Loretta stepped back, puzzled. “A secret
what?”
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Jack indicated for Loretta to lean down as he again
whispered into her ear. His sister’s eyes opened wide.

“A secret
engagement? Now where did you ever hear about
something like that?”

“Well, I probably shouldn’t tell you this, but…” Jack rubbed
his chin as a debate briefly raged in his mind. “I really don’t
want to get into trouble, Loretta, so you have to promise
me one thing. Okay?”

“Okay. What am I promising?”

“That you’ll never repeat what I’m about to tell you to
anybody–
ever.”

            
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